Trying to explore characters more - inspired by a Meg Oolders story about high school girls and thought I should try writing on a wide variety of subjects. Had my fingers crossed on this one; I enjoyed writing it but Mrs F was warning me off about staying on the right side of the 'nudge/nudge, wink/wink' line. I hope I have.
Well, you are definitely exploring new directions! And I'm enjoying them, as you're managing to help us imagine but never quite getting into the details. Love the ending on this.
The details are way more interesting if they are imagined not spoken, I think, Debs. Inferred but not explained. Readers are smart enough to add their imaginings and interpretations. Trying to be subtle, implied
As if it could have been any one else...
Belinda Jane... love it Barrie... perfect levels of sauciness and love.
Trying to explore characters more - inspired by a Meg Oolders story about high school girls and thought I should try writing on a wide variety of subjects. Had my fingers crossed on this one; I enjoyed writing it but Mrs F was warning me off about staying on the right side of the 'nudge/nudge, wink/wink' line. I hope I have.
Well, you are definitely exploring new directions! And I'm enjoying them, as you're managing to help us imagine but never quite getting into the details. Love the ending on this.
The details are way more interesting if they are imagined not spoken, I think, Debs. Inferred but not explained. Readers are smart enough to add their imaginings and interpretations. Trying to be subtle, implied
Yes! Always good to leave something to the Imagination.
I'm so glad he was her husband..... (well mostly anyway!!)
It was teetering on the edge for a while!
Love the vibe of this Barrie!
Trying out new characters, different types of stories, keeping the twists going. Always learning
Always a school day someone once said to me...so true
I've been saying that a lot in France too as I stumble thro my bad French!
"Chaque jour est un jour d'école"