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Jill's avatar

Liked the surprise twist - not what I was expecting! Pithy, and brilliant

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Feasts and Fables's avatar

Thank you so much for reading, and the kind words. That's rather made my day

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Harry Watson's avatar

Good one ... Always enjoy your twists in the tale ...

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Feasts and Fables's avatar

Thank you ... I'm practicing it as a style - maybe when I get into writing something longer (or editing my dystopian manuscript) they'll help me with transitions and chapter endings.

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