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Feasts and Fables's avatar

Very kind, Ben (and lovely e mail - I’ll reply shortly).

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Andrei Atanasov's avatar

Loved this! I’ve recently begun taking my first steps into the world of boxing, so can really feel this story. I hope I’ll be like that old man when I grow old. Patient, kind, but with a hidden strength about him.

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Feasts and Fables's avatar

So glad you saw those characteristics in him ... this is another one of those tiny pieces that might just ripple out into the longer piece it was originally intended to be.

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Andrei Atanasov's avatar

That would be great! I subscribed and I’m looming forward to reading it.

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Feasts and Fables's avatar

Very kind, thank you

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Patricia J.L. 👻🧶🖊️'s avatar

Excellent story!

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Feasts and Fables's avatar

Thank you so much. Feels like then start of something, an introduction to a character, perhaps

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Susie Mawhinney's avatar

Brain and brawn... there are so many, perhaps well disguised, parallels! Great writing Barrie, this made me think of an old bare knuckle fighter friend, long gone now but he played chess like pro, tired to teach me too even but sadly I’m all brawn!

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Feasts and Fables's avatar

I bet your friend had some tales! Yes, both worlds are rich with stories.

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Susie Mawhinney's avatar

More than I could possibly remember, he was quite a character, revered and feared in equal quantities by all...

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