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Susie Mawhinney's avatar

Great tension.!! Even in so few words...

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Feasts and Fables's avatar

Ah, thank you, Susie

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Erica Drayton's avatar

I still don’t know what I envy more in this moment: the story or the penmanship? They are both divine!

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Feasts and Fables's avatar

Too kind, thank you. ✍️

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Susie Mawhinney's avatar

How did I miss the second ?? This brings back all the angst and heartbreak of teenage years...

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Feasts and Fables's avatar

I hadn't shared it, Susie, just added it to this post ... angst was definitely the vibe I was trying to evoke, so happy with that ... and cruel, of course!

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Susie Mawhinney's avatar

And do beautifully presented too Barrie!

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Feasts and Fables's avatar

Thank you ... just messing about with my creativity!

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Leo's avatar

Nice handwriting

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Feasts and Fables's avatar

Thank you so much, Leo.

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Antonella's avatar

Very nice work. Made me feel on the cliff again. Windswept and finger frozen on the rock.

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Feasts and Fables's avatar

Sounds terrifying. Eek

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Bill Adler's avatar

You can't hear it, but I'm applauding. Marvelous!

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Feasts and Fables's avatar

Just back from a leisurely French restaurant lunch and my hearing has been sharpened by three excellent courses and a particularly lovely Charentaise red. I hear you!

Much appreciated, Bill, thank you

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Patricia J.L. 👻🧶🖊️'s avatar

Great job on all the stories.

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Feasts and Fables's avatar

Thank you so much.

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Antonella's avatar

Love the Hunger post. Feels so Primal, almost tangible anguish. Good work.

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Feasts and Fables's avatar

'primal' is such a great word. Thank you so much

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The Unhurried Reader's avatar

These are great!

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Feasts and Fables's avatar

Ah, thank you. I’ll try and fit in a few more next week. Tail end of my 80-year old mum’s visit so we’ll slip back into a routine. There are some great prompts coming up.

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