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Hopper's work a fertile place for inspiration. Great stuff.

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Thanks, Matt. Jillian Hess curates some fascinating stuff about notes. I'd been pondering a story about someone 'entering an art work' (there are some scribbles in a notebooks about a guy who has too many martinis and finds himself in 'Gin Lane"). Who knows, it might emerge ... but this one told itself to me and I thought I'd share. Thanks for the encouragement.

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Good one Barrie 👍 - can we expect a short story every week now inspired by a Hopper painting? 😉

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Unlikely to be so rigorously assiduous ... but the idea of art (or photographs) as a prompt is one I like. Happy to receive prompts so fire away!

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Vermeer's - 'The Love Letter' or Friedrich's 'Wanderer above the Sea Fog' ....

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Good choices. 'The Love Letter' immediately suggests a twist in the tale. I shall ponder the other. Thanks, Harry. Off to read your latest

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I love Hopper's paintings. And this was a lovely response to one of his most famous.

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Ah, thank you so much for reading it, Meredith ... I thought the theme of 'loneliness' writ large in his work deserved an exploration in a supporting cast. A great prompt for me to use

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Brilliant Barrie, absolutely brilliant!! Another one of your stories that I want to keep reading long after the last word 👌

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Ah, thank you. This was the first of these art-inspired tales, the one that got me thinking about doing more. I loved playing with the character of 'Murph'. He might return.

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He is such a real character! I could see and hear him instantly!

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I’ll ponder another tale!

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Looking forward to it 🙏

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Love Hopper, love this painting, love this story. Thanks Barrie

I entered the Substack universe four days ago. As a storyteller I’m delighted to find your site.

I will be posting “Stories from the Coffeehouse soon.”

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That’s so kind, Lulu. And welcome. We owned a coffee shop/deli in Wales for 5 years before selling our home and jumping in a van for 3 years. Now living a quiet life in rural France where I get plenty of moments for making up tales. Really looking forward to your ‘Stories from the Coffeehouse’. Have a great weekend.

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Thank you Barrie, delighted to find you here and for your support. It’s so important for writers to support each other, I will do my best to support you both. Happy weekend.

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So enjoyed this … love the characterisation of Murph and the licking of the pencil stub. Great story.

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I’m rereading pieces to try and stir my writing back into action. It’s a bit stagnant. Thanks for the encouragement, Andrea.

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